405 The tangled boy

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    The next morning, March 21st.

    Luoyang entered the contemporary comic circle, and when the time stopped at seven o’clock, he posted the plot of the first three paintings of “Dragon Ball”, and when the page displayed the words “published successfully”, a smile appeared on the corner of Luoyang’s mouth: “Our adventure starts from now on. It’s started…”

    Luoyang created “Dragon Ball”, compared with the animation and animation of the previous life, and made some appropriate adjustments.

    It’s an adjustment, not a revision. Luoyang is appropriately adjusting the plot of the early stage of “Dragon Ball” to make the rhythm of this comic more lively.

    This is also what Luoyang has been doing, and the same is true of writing novels. Maybe a certain work is a masterpiece, but a masterpiece will also have its shortcomings. After all, there are very few things in the world that are truly perfect, so Luoyang occasionally comments on works. Make some adjustments.

    The previous “Langya Bang” was the same, and the later “Buddha is the Tao” was the same.

    However, Luoyang is also clear that the reason why the gods are gods is because of the essence hidden in the context.

    Luoyang is very sensitive to this aspect, so no matter how you modify it, Luoyang will never change the essence of those works.

    In just five minutes after the release of “Dragon Ball”, the data shows that hundreds of thousands of readers have clicked to read it – which includes the credit of the previous work “Five Centimeters per Second”, and also has the bonus of Luoyang’s fame Effect.

    However, although the beginning is great, the follow-up still depends on the plot.

    At this moment, many editors in the contemporary comic world are anxiously waiting for the results of the comics…

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    Yu Yuanhang is a die-hard manga fan of Gong Xueyi.

    He especially likes the comic “Demon Fighting”. He played a very active role in the jihad that caused a sensation on the Internet some time ago.

    Because he wants to support “Demon Fighting” within his ability, Yu Yuanhang will definitely resist Luoyang who dares to bully Gong Xueyi. As for Gong Xueyi’s blackening of Luoyang in the comics, it is naturally also rejected by Yu Yuanhang. Voyage was selectively ignored.

    At seven o’clock the next morning, the alarm set by Yu Yuanhang rang.

    He opened his eyes, washed quickly, and then sat in front of the computer: “Dragon Ball should be released…”

    Of course, Yu Yuanhang is so active not because he is looking forward to this comic, the real reason for his enthusiasm is to find out The deficiencies in “Dragon Ball” were then exploited together with Gong Xueyi’s other fans to spit Luoyang fiercely.

    Click into the contemporary comic forum, and sure enough, “Dragon Ball” has been released and hung on the homepage.

    “Hum hum hum, wait, as long as this comic doesn’t look good, you can ask for more blessings…”

    Yu Yuanhang had already clicked on the first page of “Dragon Ball” while talking to himself, and the next moment, a big picture It appeared in Yuanhang’s field of vision. This large picture showed a child with a stick on his back, which looked very cute.

    What surprised Yu Yuanhang the most was that this child actually had a tail on his butt.

    Is this the protagonist? It’s not strange to have a tail or something in the comics. Yu Yuanhang continued to read it.

    Clicking on the second page of the comic “Dragon Ball”, a narration appeared on the page: “In a mountain long, long ago, there lived a child named Sun Wukong, and our story starts here. ”

    Pfft…

    Yu Yuanhang’s expression instantly became very strange.

    If you want to use comic subtitles on his face, it must be a violent comic style nit code teasing me?

    Yu Yuanhang felt that it was easy to get it, and the slot of Luoyang’s new work came right away: “The protagonist’s name is Sun Wukong, is it possible that this comic is a hard-to-adapt version of “Journey to the West” into a bloody fight? , a so-called bear child with a tail and a stick, is the Monkey King?”

    Speaking of Monkey King, it is all too familiar to every Chinese.

    And “Journey to the West” in this time and space of the Dragon Kingdom, in terms of fame, is not lost to the previous world.

    So when it comes to Monkey King, the first image that everyone thinks of is the monkey with the hairy face and Lei Gongzui. Now the protagonist of Luoyang’s new comic is called Sun Wukong, and the character design is really a bit of imitation, which undoubtedly makes people feel very strange. .

    “But let’s keep reading…”

    Although the protagonist’s name is a slot, it does not affect the whole comic, so attacking Luoyang is not convincing.

    On the second page, the bear boy appeared, carrying a large saw on his shoulder, stepping on a log under his feet, and making the log roll forward.

    This bear child is the one on the first page, which is the protagonist of the comics, Sun Wukong. In the comics, Sun Wukong stepped on a log under his feet and transported the wood back to his small home. Then he threw the wood into the sky, jumped up, and chopped the wood with his fist in the air.

    “It’s interesting.”

    Yu Yuanhang thought to himself when he looked at the agile skills of the bear boy in the comics.

    But this is not surprising. Luoyang’s new work is released in such a high-profile manner. If there is no strength, it can only mean that Luoyang’s brain has a problem. Therefore, Yu Yuanhang is not surprised about the occasional bright spots in the comics.

    After splitting the wood, the bear boy returned to the house and bowed to a bead on the table: “Grandpa, I’m going to dinner.”

    “Grandpa? What is this bead?” The beads may be the so-called Dragon Balls, after all, the name of this comic is “Dragon Ball”.

    Immediately afterwards, Sun Wukong began to find food in the mountains. He would pull the vines and swing around, and jump in the water for a while. Later, he wrapped his tail around the branches and hung himself upside down on the tree to eat apples.

    Seeing the Monkey King like this, Yu Yuanhang connected it with the Monkey King in “Journey to the West”.

    However, unlike the Monkey King in “Journey to the West”, this bear boy, Sun Wukong, is particularly fond of laughing, and he laughs very innocently. It seems that there is nothing to worry about in this world. In short, it is a little heartless.

    But it was this heartless personality that made Yu Yuanhang want to laugh.

    He looked at the Monkey King jumping around in the comics and thought that Sun Wukong like this was very cute.

    Shaking his head vigorously, Yu Yuanhang began to remind himself in his heart that I came to find fault, not to read comics!

    When he calmed down again, another thing happened in the comics, which made Yu Yuanhang’s eyes firmly attracted – the bear boy Sun Wukong actually provoked a leopard, and the leopard jumped on the tree and wanted to eat it. he.

    As a result, the bear boy dodged in two or three times and ran in front again, attracting the leopard.

    When the bear boy Sun Wukong finally ran to the edge of the cliff, he suddenly flashed, and the next moment the leopard fell off the cliff because it was too late to brake. At the same time, the leopard also showed a very anthropomorphic tragic expression.

    “Hahaha, the bear boy Goku is so funny…”

    Yu Yuanhang couldn’t help laughing, the corners of his mouth cracked and a smile appeared.

    However, before his smile spread completely, he quickly froze on his face again, looking very funny.

    Asshole, let’s find fault! What does it mean to look so happy? Yu Yuanhang, you are too unsatisfactory!
    This tangled
    young man had to remind himself again at this moment: “labor and management are not here to read comics, labor and management are here to find fault, find fault! Very serious kind! Can’t laugh!”

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